This is a profile of Valerie Adams who competed in the Commonwealth games.
I used Piktochart to make the profile. I really recommend Piktochart to show your learning.
Hi Ruby, Abby here from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you described all her achievements in one blog post! Next time you could describe What you had to do a bit more ! This reminded me of when I went watched Valerie Adams train. If you would like to check out my learning blog it is https://wpsabbym.blogspot.co.nz/ . Blog you later, Bye.
Hello Abby, Thanks for your feedback I will defenitly think of describing more of the progress I went through. Thanks for your comment, From Ruby, Papakura Central School
Hi Ruby! My name is Sam my School is Waikowhai Primary School. We are doing something close to that as well we got a selection people and then we chose one and then we had a couple of minutes to find out about them and then we had to describe ourselves it was a lot of fun! In your infographic could you maybe add more pictures to make the balance even. If you would like to go to my blog go to https://wpssamuelh.blogspot.co.nz/ Thanks!
Hi Ruby, My name is Ayva from Waikowhai Primary School. WOW! I really like your post about Valerie Adams The best shot put player in the whole world. This reminds me of when my class had to choose between Valerie Adams, Richie Mccaw and Jiyai Shin to find information about, I chose Valerie Adams. Next time maybe you can change the font so the writing stands out a bit more. How long did it take you to find all this information?
Feel free to give me feedback on my blog: http://wpsayvas.blogspot.com/
Hi Ruby, Abby here from Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described all her achievements in one blog post!
Next time you could describe What you had to do a bit more !
This reminded me of when I went watched Valerie Adams train.
If you would like to check out my learning blog it is
https://wpsabbym.blogspot.co.nz/ .
Blog you later, Bye.
Hello Abby,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your feedback I will defenitly think of describing more of the progress I went through.
Thanks for your comment,
From Ruby, Papakura Central School
Hi Ruby!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sam my School is Waikowhai Primary School.
We are doing something close to that as well we got a selection people and then we chose one and then we had a couple of minutes to find out about them and then we had to describe ourselves it was a lot of fun!
In your infographic could you maybe add more pictures to make the balance even.
If you would like to go to my blog go to https://wpssamuelh.blogspot.co.nz/ Thanks!
Hi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ayva from Waikowhai Primary School. WOW! I really like your post about Valerie Adams The best shot put player in the whole world. This reminds me of when my class had to choose between Valerie Adams, Richie Mccaw and Jiyai Shin to find information about, I chose Valerie Adams. Next time maybe you can change the font so the writing stands out a bit more. How long did it take you to find all this information?
Feel free to give me feedback on my blog: http://wpsayvas.blogspot.com/