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Wednesday 14 March 2018

Below the Earth

                                                                  Below Earth 1
Deep down in the earth, all is quiet, all is dark, nothing moves until a little girl unhurriedly peeped around the corner of a rock. “Mum?” she said softly peering around the dark damp empty space which was once Earth. “Mum!” she howled sucking her thumb. She heard a loud sound coming from further down. She screamed loudly scared of the noise. But just as she did she felt a hand wrap around her face and cover her mouth. The grip was so strong, so painful. “Quiet!” yelled someone pulling her back against the grubby dirt . She tried to scream for help but she knew there was no one else deep down in the earth. The person holding her tightly let go of her sharply making sure she wasn’t armed. “Please don’t harm me I did nothing” said 8 year old Gemini Zalback looking at the young girl who had almost killed her.

 “Nonsense, there’s someone else down here we have to make a move” The young girl said tugging at Gemini’s hand. “ How old are you? What’s Your Name? What year is it again? Gemini kept on questioning taking of off the girl’s fingers off her wrist one by one. “I’m Libra, i’m 12 years old, and it’s year 2089” said Libra irked and grasped tight of Gemini’s hand and pulled her further on down deeper into the Earth. “Why are we going towards the noise?” Gemini questioned nervously. But Libra didn’t reply instead she just continued sprinting . “ Please slow down” puffed Gemini tiredly. They came to a ravine. Lava was sitting at the bottom. “Jump!” shouted Libra jumping off the edge. So Gemini jumped. “No!” screamed a voice from behind!”

For our writing our teacher gave us an interesting story stater. The story starter was Deep down in earth, all is quiet, all is dark, nothing moves until.....
The purpose was to narrate.
The audience I recommend would be people interested in adventure.
I hope you enjoy my Book. Below Earth.

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